In this precious world, languages are playing the major role to transfer one’s feelings or sad to others. Although, there are different sort of languages spoken by the people who are living around the world. If it comes to under one language, there are certain pros and cons should consider which are summarized below.
On the one hand, when consider about the merits of under become one language, it is bestow enormous benefits to masses. Firstly, it will really helpful to job seekers who are seeking to find the job in alien countries will get their desired work without the requirement of language grades. Secondly, the people who are willing to travel around the world, they can arrange the international tours without the need of interpretor or guide. Thirdly, it will lead to unity between nations, for example certain Asian countries, who are separated in terms of language, may join together for originating the strongest continents in this world.
On the other hand, to think about the demerits of this, with out perishing existing language it is impossible. Firs of all, the existed languages are originated by their perspective ancestors for different reasons, it is mingled with people tradition and habits, future generation will forget everything about the peerless stories of ancestors life style, and also people should adopt the new language, must be difficult to who are loving their native language. Furthermore, it will pave the way to protest against this scheme. Above all, people will forget to taste the adventure of learning new things, and will make them to live a normal routine life.
To sup up this, it seems to me that there are equal points to both advantages and dis advantages of to becoming beneath one language, but in reality it would be difficult to live under one language after destroyed more than million languages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r one's feelings or sad to others. Although, there are different sort of languages ...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sorts'?
Suggestion: sorts
...o others. Although, there are different sort of languages spoken by the people who a...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bestowed'.
Suggestion: bestowed
...its of under become one language, it is bestow enormous benefits to masses. Firstly, i...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...d, to think about the demerits of this, with out perishing existing language it is impos...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... new language, must be difficult to who are loving their native language. Furthermore, it ...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... one language after destroyed more than million languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 26.3917525773 220% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 937.175257732 167% => OK
No of words: 309.0 206.0 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05501618123 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57629164127 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6753622169 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 4.34317383033 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253247875446 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922390107959 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675534155678 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161311718589 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404116242979 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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