In this sophisticated world, science and new technology has bestowed multifarious privileges to the people. However, the manually exposed creations like paintings, stories and musics are yet most famous among masses due to the lively performance from the artists, this essay elaborates the reasons in detail.
First and foremost, it is the deniable fact that artificers are always getting reference and admiration from all over world through their alluring extraordinary talent, which is come from their immense exertion along with structured path from the spiritual side. Furthermore, not like the other technical thing, the artists worship and enshrined their competency as a boon from the God, so the people gets the adorable blessings though the creations of craftsman.
In addition to this, while reading books and listening musics may realize the importance of the prime thing of this birth because that is contributing with the nature and also there are so many eye opening incidents are happening in this society among the perpetrator, for example, the famous writer Sheddy who punished for 6 year prison life owing to his adverse deeds in school, during that period he was read so many books which changed his life utterly, now he is the inspiration of all youths.
It is irrefutable fact that science and technology has made so many positive changes in human life by doing their work effortlessly, it facilitates to relent the eke substantially and saves the people’s precious time, which pave the way to spend time with family members and some recreational activities and so on.
To sum up this, it seems to me that even though the current era has afford enormous waivers to change the people’s life ease, the intrinsic value of artists is virtually high due to the soulful creations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18367346939 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78790416696 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.418316376 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.714285714 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944859452094 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05160345731 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466942321485 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557431288252 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278036626397 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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