In this bustling world, it is essential and also indispensable to move to alien countries to fulfill our requirements. However, while living and working with anonymity countries, there are certain pros and cons we would encounter which is discussed below.
According to the benefits of living and working in alien countries, they afford plenty of privileges in order to health, pursuit job, alluring allowances and so on. These are the aspects which we lost from our native country. Furthermore, we can enjoy the alien culture, tradition and can relish delicious verity of foods. Those will impart the adventure feel and flabbergasting moments. In addition, our life style and way of living will be changed completely, especially, on working people who can learn new strategies and technology which will make them strong in their own field. For instance, sundar pitchai, who is the CEO of google and being the testimony of successful immigrant.
In terms of disadvantage of living and working in alien countries, first of all, the climate condition will be the great challenge to us, whatever it be we should accept, we can not neglect which is really tough to cope especially for Asian countries immigrants. Then the major issue is xenophobic, we will encounter this while working with cliques and neighbors, whether some Alien will be socialize or not, so we have to be wary of alien’s mind set. Eventually we will firmly miss our beloved ones and our traditional foods, culture and so on. Those will be always in our heart as a memory which will impart us longing entire life.
To sum up this, even though it seems lot of complex to live and work in alien countries, in de-facto it will be pleasant while accepting everything happily.
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double check the sentence
double check the sentence mean? the number of words is low? it shows 292,we need 250 only.how many sentence we need ?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... the great challenge to us, whatever it be we should accept, we can not neglect wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75202717893 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7611001057 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145524402113 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527937799929 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592695732385 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108512647443 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398455268774 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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