This precious world is getting lost it is uniqueness due to the raising pollution from different sort of ways and one of the things is air traffic pollution. Certain people think raising the fare of air travel might reduce the pollution, is it possible? Certainly not and the reasons are summarized below.
First and foremost, air traffic is the prime thing in this hectic world to reach the destination as soon as possible, nowadays, the number of utilization of air travel is increased substantially due to the benefits, if the fare of the airways is elated, people will affect directly by financially and also it will originate the demand amid this society on the house hold products which is imported from other alien countries for that quality and design. Furthermore, tourism will be reduced significantly, which will indirectly jeopardize the economy of the country and the people's life who rely on tourism will be difficult to run. At last, the dream of abroad will be a reverie to the middle class people who have immense curiosity on travel.
Certainly, it is undeniable fact that raising the ticket amount of air travel will control the utilization of people not deter, rather, it will be another burden to them, more over, the quantum of air pollution is virtually less than the other pollution. Even though it affects the environmental at low rate, there is a opportunity to reduce the pollution through introducing new identification, which will diminish the problem at half extent.
To recapitulate this, it seems to me that increasing the fare of travel in airways is not a fruitful one to the people and country, rather, curtailing the pollution can take other measures to this phenomenon will be worthwhile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...dize the economy of the country and the peoples life who rely on tourism will be diffic...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the environmental at low rate, there is a opportunity to reduce the pollution thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01038062284 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82265998555 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536332179931 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.046647967 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.888888889 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198592412799 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915173238073 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568125190417 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132719899601 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278024296485 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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