Time is the precious and peerless one in this fast pace world, meanwhile, it is being a debatable issue that the advent of technologies are saving the people’s time or consuming?. However, it seems apparently that the new discoveries are based on time savings not for wasting, and it varies from everyone and the reasons are summarized below.
First and foremost, it if irrefutable fact that technologies are the major part of every one’s life, it makes people’s life happily through changing their work from hard to ease by affording new variety of useful products. Firstly, according to travel, there is huge difference between erstwhile and current utilization, now people can wandering along the world with in a day. Secondly it facilitate the house works that means makes people’s work effortlessly by introducing house hold items like washing machine and grinder and so on, which is reduce the amount of time spending. Thirdly the electronic items like, cellphones, computers are the most largely used items among the people, which is used to people to share their day to day life and reduce the distance between the people, so they do not need to go in person.
On the other hand, to reckon about the technology, it is consumes certain time from people by making some attraction. For example, cellphones, people are now addicted to use this, most of the time of day they are in social media like face book and twitter for chatting with people are surfing in internet for certain useless things, it consumes people’s time substantially, so they can not focus their routine life needs. For instance the famous article Hindu released the statistical data based on the masses habit, which indicates that more than 65 percent of people are addicted with this new trend, it is really the daunting issue to concern.
To sum up this, it seems to me that utilizing the technology is depend upon the behaviour of person and how they wield that. If it can regulate by their own interest definitely it will save the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...;s time or consuming?. However, it seems apparently that the new discoveries are ...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'facilitates'?
Suggestion: facilitates
...ng the world with in a day. Secondly it facilitate the house works that means makes people...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...machine and grinder and so on, which is reduce the amount of time spending. Thirdly th...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'masses'' or 'mass's', 'masse's'?
Suggestion: masses'; mass's; masse's
...eased the statistical data based on the masses habit, which indicates that more than 6...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... to me that utilizing the technology is depend upon the behaviour of person and how th...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iour of person and how they wield that. If it can regulate by their own interest d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96802325581 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70506799314 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549418604651 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8241385461 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.363636364 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2727272727 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18279691037 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817750382283 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066546163456 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131734737954 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618381696315 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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