In this exponential world, success is the magnificent one, which is the dream of every one’s life, to attain this, they are ready to sacrifice everything in their pleasant life. However, some people think they can get victory via luck rather than hard work, it is completely contrary to the present circumstance and the reasons are summarized below.
In the present status quo, according to the success, it is the unrivalled thing who is seeking to avail this and who want to retain within them self, because, it will not ripen to every one, rather, who work hard without expecting anything will get victory. Furthermore, hard work makes man perfect that means, who are toiling towards the goal incessantly, they will be equipped by the glorious things like time management, problem solving skills, nuances and subtle in their perspective sector, which are the basic elements to obtain triumph, and it is originating them as a victorious person in this society. For instance, Dhirubhai Ambani who was the chairman of Reliance industry and inspiration of all young people, came from poor environment with plenty of obstacles, eventually he got victory by his incessant exertion and diligent. Now he is being a testimony of successful hard worker.
On the other hand, certain people think success will come by God’s grace or their own luck. Or else, they are waiting for the moment, due to the astrologist predict. Of course, some people win lotteries or any jackpot, but, it is precarious, after some days the money will ruin. They have to wait for another good time, it will devastate their rest of life. So, They can not be a successful person. For example, since the world initiate, there is no statistical record that some one reached the extreme position by his or her luck.
To conclude this, it seems to me that in this world it is not cakewalk to get anything without exertion, there is no other chances to attain conquest in terms of fortune.
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It is a good essay. It deserves 7.5 out of 9.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...te, there is no statistical record that some one reached the extreme position by his or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91591591592 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60352913361 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588588588589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5194850989 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.923076923 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159357469406 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644464181996 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583698071503 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842516078027 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496953189039 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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