It is irrefutable fact that English is the vital language for contribute the important role on the strides of tourism in terms of convey the real stance of the tourist places. Meanwhile, certain people think that this trajectory may pave the way to have only one language in globe. It has both cons and pros and summarized below.
First and foremost, nowadays, tourist is the pivotal thing, to know about the entire people’s tradition and culture, if it comes to under one language, it will become effortlessly. Furthermore, it facilitates the path to go anywhere around the world without the aid of both guides and interpretors, it will elate the tourist’s enthusiasm through roaming as per their wish. In addition to this, people can learn certain new things hopefully and can implement it to their own life to inflate the proficiency to become a victorious man in this compete society.
On the other hand, to reckon about under on language, it is undoubtedly a huge issue to the existing people’s thoughts, For example, every famous place has unique identity by their ages or design and it will lost this identity at passage of time. Besides, certain people who are in the unwavering love about their history, tradition and culture will forget everything in impending years, it leads to the havoc of so many tiny community. The number of perished old tradition and culture are the testimony of this trend.
To sum up this, it seems to me that in the development of tourism should not be only based on the language, instead of this, it has plenty of other factors to concern to make a fruitful community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...ity by their ages or design and it will lost this identity at passage of time. Besid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8880866426 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77060701148 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3016863167 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26304403229 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895366092176 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065452646196 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146725617746 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644429912106 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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