IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015 and predictions for 2025
The chart illustrates obviously the variation in the number of incomes from three different main exports of Someland in 2005, 2015 and future 2025.
It is clear from that chart that the money from dairy products and International tourism had an upward trend. Meanwhile, the revenue from meat product occupied smallest amount and gradually decrease over the years.
In 2005, the amount of money from International tourism was highest to over 6 billion USD, after five years, there was an increase by 1 billion USD. According the prediction, this number will attain to 8 billion USD in 2025. By contrast, In 2015, Someland exported meat product less 1 billion USD than that in 2005 and the tendency will go down to the lowest point about 3 billion USD over a period of ten years.
From 2005 to 2015, dairy product witnessed a soared dramatically to over 8 billion USD and parity with International tourism. Even though the experts assume that income from dairy product will be decreased in 2025 but it might not present a remarkable change and the number that was proposed is 7.5 billion USD.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87165775401 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54774534047 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550802139037 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8340874734 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135063343042 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751221166507 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866968264026 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112342700138 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103220957455 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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