Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to provide you the collective feedback from the local area people whether to opt the sponsor to the children local sports or open-air concerts.
Let me explain more in detail. I am a resident of this area for 5 years. The children here are highly interested in badminton and football sports; However, they are playing in their free time at the locality itself. If you would provide them some academy training it would enhance the children's physical growth. Moreover, in recent days children are showing more interest in the sports in comparison with the past days.
Although, open-air has its own benefits like, in the local area all aged group people will have a chance to come and spend time and can communicate with each other. Further, they too will feel relaxed from the daily routine stressed worked.
Though open-air concerts have its own benefits, in my perspective it would be grateful if you could sponsor a local children's sports as this will beneficial for there future.
Looking forward an update from you soon. Any decision taken from you is respected.
Yours Sincerely,
Anusha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...air concerts. Let me explain more in detail. I am a resident of this area for...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...their free time at the locality itself. If you would provide them some academy tra...
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Line 6, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ugh, open-air has its own benefits like, in the local area all aged group people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97409326425 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42528006815 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.376829022 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239788866799 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777097918717 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738414342775 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131872231803 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729386222748 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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