Dear Spandu,
Hope you are doing good. It's been so long time we didn't meet.
I am writing this letter for inviting you to my new house which I moved recently. If you would recall, I usually discussed about my new house with you. After a long time, we have shifted to the new place.
Let me explain in more detail. Every day, I had traveled 2hours from my old house to the office. It's become relatively hard for me such a long journey; however, results in the health issues. My situation became worse, that I couldn't able to bend to pick anything from the floor because of my immense backache pain. As per doctor recommendation, we strongly decided to move to new house.
I would say if you see the house, you would really like it. The new house is very spacious located in a good gated community. The rooms are divided into 1 master bedroom, 1 guests/drawing room, kitchen and children room.The rooms were furnished with an amazing interior design. Apart from this, we have a gardening area as well to plan the trees.
Can it be possible for you to come on this weekend? If this is not been possible for you, make it any of your free time. It would be more grateful if you could bring your husband and children. It's been more than a year I have met them. We can have a barbeque party in my new house.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your Friend,
Anusha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ening area as well to plan the trees. Can it be possible for you to come on th...
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...earing from you. Your Friend, Anusha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39607843137 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31088559513 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8910341558 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.380952381 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2380952381 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278592409361 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840844565204 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663887842306 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122769581189 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718314943074 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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