last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
2) explain why you didn't write earlier.
3) invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Sarah and John,
I hope you both are doing very well. First of all, I’d like to thank you for such a memorable trip; it was one of my best vacations in Singapore. I can’t thank you enough for your hospitality and your time to stay with me. I’ve just received your email with all photos and believe me such an amazing photographer john is, I mean all photos are stunning.
Furthermore, sorry I was unable to write you back earlier as something worse happened when I left to my home. My luggage was mistakenly sent to somewhere else instead of Sydney and I had waited 24 hours for it to get it back. The ordeal does finished yet; when I reached home, I was told that my landlord forgot to pay electricity bills and I had to live there without basic need for one day.
Anyway, why don’t you come and visit Australia? I’ll be free next month and I can plan your itinerary as well. Do let me know if you want to come.
Hope to see you soon.
Lots of love,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... I was unable to write you back earlier as something worse happened when I left to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, i mean, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39459459459 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39700324227 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5712963998 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.75 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328226079632 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116094993242 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795335112603 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149044124077 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104315968737 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.