Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photo of your holidays.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter,
-Thank them for the photos and for holidays.
-Explain why you didn't write earlier.
-Invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Pratik and Ananya,
I hope you and your life is going fabulous as usual. I’m writing this letter to thanking you for spent time with me during my holidays and you guys take two weeks off for me. Literally, you guys nailed it.
Thank you friends for such an excellent photography and favorite photos are now hanging on my office desk as well as in my house. After seeing photos for sometime I way back in past and mesmerizing the happiness and cherishing the time we spend together. This was a memorable trip for me ever.
I was unable to write the letter earlier as after holidays my office desk was full of pending works which required prior attention to clean it up and then I indulged in my day-to-day activity.
Hey buddies, I’ve totally forgotten to tell you that I’m going to marry in this Feb-19. Hence, I’m inviting you guys to come for holidays in my marriage. It’ll be great fund and after marriage we can go for visit and outing to enjoy for one week.
Regards,
Nishant
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| 2018-12-07 | nishant bhanderi | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enjoy for one week. Regards, Nishant
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69060773481 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40698899958 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1950074736 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267886695769 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102276441821 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700707751779 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131577427649 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112418249723 0.0580467560999 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.