it is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.
Give some reasons why this change has happened ad suggest how families could be brought closer together.
Include any relevant examples for your experience.
Family is playing prominent role in an personal life. It is the family which is worth it to live for. In earlier days, families were living together compare with present era where they are not staying close to each other as to be used. In this essay, I will enlist certain causes to such a thing to happen along with highlighting implemented measures to curb this.
Now-a-days, there are numbers of reason behind families not togetherness. For the most obvious reason is family members are stay far away from each other. People believe now in nuclear family for many social, financial or personal reasons. It becoming trend at present to stay alone and away from their belonging and family togetherness is becoming more materialist thing at present. In addition, at current era, people do have hectic schedule of work. For the seek of betterment of family and temptation of success and make secure future, man do work 24*7 without thinking it further. For example, Survey conducted by Gujarat Government in year Dec-17, it concluded the result in every cities of Gujarat 75% public believe to live in nuclear family as compare to past data of year Dec-2007.
Fortunately, remedies are available to mitigate this issue. To begin with, to keep family close every member should put an effort so that they would be close to each other. They should find ways by which they can live side by side of each other. For instance, Family get together, a family trip etc. Moreover, people should try to manage tie. It is responsibility of all members in family that they should take out some free time from their busy schedule. After all, it is the family for whom to worth it for living.
I believe nuclear family and hectic schedule are the causes behind it which affect it more. If solutions like staying close with one another and learn for time management implemented, I think the problem at hand can be easily dealt with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Family is playing prominent role in an personal life. It is the family which i...
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Line 3, column 750, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...public believe to live in nuclear family as compare to past data of year Dec-2007...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, after all, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80120481928 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44501145165 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7543710287 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253725271837 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846934056673 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515278093535 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163368936629 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489619759411 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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