Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have
just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
● thank them for the photos and for the holiday
● explain why you didn’t write earlier
● invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Jay and Annie
I hope you both are doing great. I'm writing to let you know that I'd a great time with you guys and thank you for the remarkable holiday in your city.
I've just received the pictures of the trip; this was the most mesmerizing sabbatical I've ever spent. Undoubtedly, Italy is a picturesque site to spend holidays, but I'm grateful to you for your hospitality and love you both gave to make my trip worth remembering.
Pardon me, for responding late because when I came back from the holidays, my mother got seriously ill. She was suffering from cardiovascular disease, and I had to take care of her but now she is absolutely fine.
I'd like to invite both of you to my brother's wedding which is due on the 8th of September, spend your summer break with me and my family. I've made an amazing plan; after marriage, we will go on a trip to the northern areas of Pakistan. I am sure you will love it.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Maryam Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49450549451 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52338417549 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.47222919 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3636363636 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281726240483 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099222833152 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114956400948 0.0603063233224 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15992847899 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116160801588 0.0580467560999 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.