Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Sara,
Hope you are doing well. It was such a sheer enjoyment last week, spending some lovely days with you in your spectacular village. I have just received photos you have sent and I writing to express my gratitude for all your kindness.
I would like to tell you how cheerful I felt when I received these amazing photos, which bring me lots of unforgettable memories. In most of them, we are laughing and I love them more since they captured those cheerful moments. I think taking photo is the best way to record moments. Besides, the quality of photos is great and I decided to print some of them.
As you know, I was so much busy with my work which was predictable after that long holiday. There were lots of essential tasks that I was forced to do, preparing some reports for our upcoming presentation and some boring meetings. So, I really was not able to make time to write you.I hope you accept my apologies.
I would like to invite you to come over my place for the new year holiday, since, as you know, here people used to celebrate this occasion very interesting. There would be some exciting fireworks, dance performances and free concerts. I am sure you will enjoy.
Once again I really appreciate your hostility. I am looking forward to hear from you.
Best regards,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... just received photos you have sent and I writing to express my gratitude for all...
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Line 11, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... was not able to make time to write you.I hope you accept my apologies. I w...
^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oncerts. I am sure you will enjoy. Once again I really appreciate your hostilit...
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Line 19, column 69, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...te your hostility. I am looking forward to hear from you. Best regards, Yalda Asg...
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Line 21, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to hear from you. Best regards, Yalda Asgari.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, really, so, well, as for, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68803418803 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47571667576 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662393162393 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6999677002 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5625 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392048206946 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11264887622 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069613711916 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208543502946 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850375715396 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.