Dear Jasmine;
I hope everything is going on well with you, I’m writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality and for such beautiful photos from our holiday in Noshahr forests and golden cost of the sea that you mailed to me. They are really nice with high-quality resolution.
My dear friend, I’m so sorry because of my delay to write a letter to you, unfortunately, last month when I came back home, I got bad flu and doctors told me it's a rare virus that infected half of the people in town and I had to rest in hospital for 2 weeks and now I'm feeling better hopefully.
I wonder if you like to spend the next holiday which is the Noroz festival with me, I think it's gonna be a wonderful time for us and I can take you to historical sites in my city.
I hope to you soon.
Yours’
Sogol
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development? 56
- Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Some say that people living in high rise apartments are lonely and unhappy while others say that it s advantageous to stay in high rise apartments Discuss both views and give your opinion 92
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...home, I got bad flu and doctors told me its a rare virus that infected half of the ...
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Line 4, column 272, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...to rest in hospital for 2 weeks and now Im feeling better hopefully. I wonder ...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke you to historical sites in my city. I hope to you soon. Yours' Sogol
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32051282051 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45659225277 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685897435897 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.70297917 44.8134815571 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.8 76.5299724578 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 16.8248392259 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372058664351 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167135724281 0.0766984524023 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994456460961 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229923184752 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972508232048 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.37 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.