Hi Folks,
I believe everyone is doing well and my words will bring you cheerfulness. I would like to thank each and every one of you that last week I had a tremendous outing with you all. Today morning I have received your letter with a bunch of photos which we took at the Niagara falls. All photos are clear and unforgettable especially the picture who taken by John is excellent.
I thought to write the acknowledgment letter after landing in my country. Unfortunately, I had stuck with the work that I need to deliver it immediately on that week so I couldn't acknowledge it quickly and apologize for that.
Moreover, there is the biggest festival in Washington D.C is going to happen next month. The place where I am living is notorious for black Friday celebration. People tend to celebrate the events spectacularly. So I would like to invite everyone to participate in those events and enjoy every moment happily. In addition, don't worry about dwelling, I can arrange everything which is essential for your stay. I looking forward to receiving a reply from you.
Yours lovingly
Abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...you cheerfulness. I would like to thank each and every one of you that last week I had a tremendou...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
...I had a tremendous outing with you all. Today morning I have received your letter with a bunc...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...eliver it immediately on that week so I couldnt acknowledge it quickly and apologize fo...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: C
...is the biggest festival in Washington D.C is going to happen next month. The plac...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...njoy every moment happily. In addition, dont worry about dwelling, I can arrange eve...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...thing which is essential for your stay. I looking forward to receiving a reply fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8750857326 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677248677249 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0264250802 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281968355435 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784281851135 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060331394086 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156441012354 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787556790373 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.