Dear Raj and Tania,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am very thankful to you guys for the invitation and being such pleasant hosts. The house was awesome and very cozy. The foods were truly delicious and I really miss them now. The pictures in the envelope are making me lost in the memories that we spent together.
Let me explain my situation, why I did not write this letter earlier. After returning from the trip, most of the time was consumed in unpacking. Since I was on holiday, stacked work in the office needs to be sorted. Neither my maid was coming nor my cook. I thought of writing the letter as soon as everything become normal.
Would you both offer me the same privilege of hosting you guys this autumn? The weather will be very pleasant to visit beaches and roaming around. Moreover, the nightlife will be amazing during this period.
Hope to meet you guys soon.
Your friend,
Sumit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y delicious and I really miss them now. The pictures in the envelope are making me ...
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Line 8, column 59, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'guy'
Suggestion: guy
...er me the same privilege of hosting you guys this autumn? The weather will be very p...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58083832335 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22306548516 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4148191592 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.6428571429 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9285714286 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205260199753 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593623515228 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638660951846 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111364391858 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260398466137 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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