Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house They have just sent you some holiday photos Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the holiday and the photos explain why you didn t write earli

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Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
thank them for the holiday and the photos
explain why you didn’t write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...I hope you have had an amazing weekend. it has been a pleasure meeting you at your...
^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
... have sent me through post this Monday. thanks for sending me the pictures and for inv...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...stay at your residence during holidays. it was an unforgettable holiday experience...
^^
Line 4, column 371, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...t beach and fun time with you guys. Ah! how lucky am I for having such wonderful ma...
^^^
Line 8, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...been offered for a project manager place , so I am glad to invite you guys to come...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31782945736 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39682213344 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7659160022 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29063557004 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133164278963 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705283676043 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164502408716 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727895526854 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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