You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
As a consequence of relentless advances in technology, the learning attitudes have been changed dramatically. Educational systems have been focusing on replacing the printed material, assignments and books with the computers and laptops. Let see the pitfalls and significance of both of aspects.
The incredible technology has replaced paper based system into computer based in the schools. Today's generation has become computer savvy which incur some advantages. First of all, those who learn to use computers and new technology has been considered more intelligent, quick learner, and competitive. Young ones practise to survive in challenging conditions and learn modification techniques according to the changes. Furthermore, the more they used-to the new technology, the better they have cognitive ability. Secondly, their time management will be better than others. since they learnt multiple techniques to shorten the length of completing the assigned task. In this way, they would be able to learn multitasking and time management skill eventually preparing themselves for future competitive job and business market.
On the contrary, students may have the vision loss, bad posture backache, and multiple behavioral changes. For example, youngsters usually develop vision loss due to over use of electronic devices. Artificial intelligence has had a great impact on increasing the risk of backache and posture problems. this may lead to paralysis, loss of limb due to DVT or blood clotting due to sluggish blood flow in veins and arteries. Another probable condition due to misuse of new technology is unlawful act and aggressive nature among teenagers. since the violence could be noticed among young adults due to overuse of electronic gadgets containing violent games.
To close, by looking at both sides of the above mentioned aspect, I would prefer to embrace the idea that technology has more advantages which definitely outweigh its disadvantages. artificial intelligence has been considered as never-ending boundaries, ultimately benefitting the society at large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57371794872 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94153074765 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 312.0 20.2975951904 1537% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1739.0 106.682146367 1630% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 312.0 20.7667163134 1502% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 99.0 7.06120827912 1402% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111843521126 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111843521126 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615568022899 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443808696583 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 160.8 13.0946893788 1228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -262.12 50.2224549098 -522% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 127.3 11.3001002004 1127% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.51 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.73 8.58950901804 288% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 65.0 9.78957915832 664% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 126.8 10.1190380762 1253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 127.0 10.7795591182 1178% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.