Last year you went on a camping tour with your family. A friend has contacted you about the your and asked you whether you would recommend it.
Write a letter your friend about the trip. In your letter
• say where you went and how you travelled
• describe the place and the accommodation
• suggest why he/she should go on this holiday
Dear Nazlı,
I was great to get your letter and hear you are interested in camping tour. I would strongly recommend to go to camping tour which I made with my family last year. We decided to join camping tour in Kakadu National Park, largest national park in Australia.
I would mention about transportation to go there. We flew to Darwin at first. It took about 4 hours from Melbourne. After flight, we rented four-wheel drive vehicle because of rough terrain along the road on which driving took one hour.
At the end of journey, we said hello to endless greenery. There is a river flowing through the forest but it is dangerous and forbidden to swim in this river because it is the habitat of crocodiles. In addition, Kakadu is the home to more than a third of Australia’s bird species. We watched and photographed the birds by participating in many activities during Kakadu Bird Week.
I would like to point out that there is no need to worry about accommodation because there are many alternatives. We thought that we would be out all day to take part in activities so we rented cabins with bunk beds. Price includes breakfast and dinner as well.
I suggest you not postpone this holiday plan next year. You should start to holiday plan immediately. The main reason you should join camping tour this year is that wilderness may change due to global warming and poaching. At the same time, not only local experts and scientist but also individuals are eager to attend Bird Week so prices may rise next year.
Have fun.
Lots of love.
Başak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend going', 'recommend gonna'.
Suggestion: recommend going; recommend gonna
...ested in camping tour. I would strongly recommend to go to camping tour which I made with my fa...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the largest'.
Suggestion: , the largest
...oin camping tour in Kakadu National Park, largest national park in Australia. I would m...
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Line 11, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but also individuals are eager to attend Bird Week so prices may rise next year. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so, third, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72262773723 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61488136647 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1573747843 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1052631579 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4210526316 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68421052632 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204020596963 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056484132627 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079504969878 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103094360978 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956654121009 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.