letter to the bank manager
To, Date
Branch manager 11/01/2018
XYZ bank
Subject: Application for approval for a small business loan.
Sir,
This is to apply for a small business loan for an amount of 100 thousand Dollars.
The loan amount requested will be used to lease a warehouse to store apparels of men, women and kids.
The have checked for the availability of some of the warehouses near the Beacon Hills Industrial area.
Also refer to the quotes available for leases available in nearby societies.
Warehouse/ Storage Name Quotes
1. ABC Warehouses $ 90,000
2. BGRT Storages $ 95,000
I have also attached my income proofs and Identity verifications along with this application.
Kindly review the application and provide me the approval for disbursal of at least 100 thousand dollars as loan, I do agree all the terms and conditions as per the Bank’s loans guidelines.
Regards
Nitin Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Date Branch manager 11/01/2018 XYZ bank Subject: Application for app...
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Line 10, column 42, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he have checked for the availability of some of the warehouses near the Beacon Hills Indust...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$90'.
Suggestion: $90
...ame Quotes 1. ABC Warehouses $ 90,000 2. BGRT Storages $ 95,000 ...
^^^^
Line 14, column 24, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$95'.
Suggestion: $95
... $ 90,000 2. BGRT Storages $ 95,000 I have also attached my income p...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61538461538 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80263168325 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706293706294 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8001004015 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719278378006 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231482963009 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051894370171 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0194507142355 0.12726935374 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452668449241 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 8.71597938144 169% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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