Letter to a Landlord
Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include
Where you live
The problem
What he should do
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am Lina, one of the residences in ATR apartment for the last 2 years which is located in Jaspal road, Nellore. I am writing this letter to complain about the noise coming into this apartment.
I am staying on the 5th floor, the road views flat 5B. For the last 1 month, I am getting a disturbance in the flat near the balcony. I think the rods have a loose connection and making noise when the wind flow is high. As this is the rainy season the wind flow is too high the noise is increased from last month because of this we unable to have a good sleep.
Please schedule to send an engineer to fix it as early as possible, I am available in the flat for a full day on weekends. If you need to reach me to further discuss, please contact my mobile number 23232323. I appreciate your attention and thank you for your understanding and support.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convince. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.
Yours Sincerely,
Lima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he noise coming into this apartment. I am staying on the 5th floor, the road v...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or, the road views flat 5B. For the last 1 month, I am getting a disturbance in t...
^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur kind cooperation. Yours Sincerely, Lima
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42780748663 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48999810014 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7320940154 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149755592877 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570201123934 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459574630034 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901374485769 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033427781822 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.