A letter to your friend who were traveling overseas, and you were staying at their apartment. There was a storm at that time and the apartment got damaged.
In the letter, you should:
• tell your friend about the storm
• explain how the damage got
• detail what repairs need to be done.
Dear John,
How is your trip going on in Singapore? I hope this letter finds you well. I have sad news for you that last Monday, a storm hit our city. It was a horrifying experience as wind was blowing 150 km/hour. I am sure that you might have received notification on weather forecast app.
Heartbreaking news is that your roof at the back room was damaged as a hung tree branch fall on it. Although the weight of that branch was quite high, damage was only restricted to roof due to strong steel reinforcement.
I have already contacted a local builder to repair the roof. The cost of repair will not be more than Rs. 20000 as per the builder and it will take only three days to correct the damage. Moreover, contractor suggested me to use steel roof instead of asbestos roof, which will cost us Rs. 1000 more.
You do not worry about your house, as I will take care of the repairing process. Let me know your thought whether we should go for steel roof or asbestos roof as soon as you receive this mail.
Regards,
Bibhu
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-26 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46073298429 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35418194662 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7023513984 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173462823053 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062042018249 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049205114969 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108463053633 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668675551364 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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