the line graph represents the percentage of visitors to Scotland who visited four different attractions between 1980 and 2010.
Overall castle and zoo increased whereas aquarium , festival decreased . In 1980 the number of tourists visited castle about 25% and the zoo was approximately 10% and in 1995 the number visitors who visited castle peaking up around 45% , the zoo was slightly fluctuate about 10% and the last in 2010 the castle increase in around 33% , the zoo was increase significantly about 20% On the other hand , the aquarium and festival were decrease. In 1980 the number of tourist visited aquarium approximately 20% , the festival was the highest about 30% . In 1995 , the festival decrease around 25% , the aquarium was increase slightly ,in 2010 at the end the festival was decrease about 29% and the aquarium to reduce approximately 10%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: ,
...astle and zoo increased whereas aquarium , festival decreased . In 1980 the number...
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...who visited castle peaking up around 45% , the zoo was slightly fluctuate about 10...
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...ignificantly about 20% On the other hand , the aquarium and festival were decrease...
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...urist visited aquarium approximately 20% , the festival was the highest about 30% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 32.9175257732 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13669064748 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77770919484 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 127.690721649 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453237410072 0.622605031667 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.70071633 44.8134815571 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.8 76.5299724578 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 16.8248392259 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106836999265 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914479395977 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128052589431 0.0603063233224 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191533271778 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150615812621 0.0580467560999 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 8.37731958763 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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