A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head.
In your letter:
● Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
● Explain why would they be of interest to the students
● Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in speaking about my country during the International day event conducted by our college.
My country has a unique culture. Therefore, I would like to talk about the food, sports, and language of my nation which reflects our traditions.
Furthermore, I am glad to discuss various positive contributions to the world that has made by the people of my country.
In the last few decades, many satellites were sent into space by my country. Many of the students at our college study aeronautical engineering. Therefore, I think it will be very interesting for them to know the important aspects happened in recent times. This information is often not available in academic textbooks.
I will really appreciate it if I can get access to a projector and a sound system as I want to play some videos.
I hope you will accept my request. Thanking you in advance.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Smith.
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- Many students find it hard to pay attention at school What are the reasons for this What could be done to solve this problem 73
- Your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport Write an email to your friend In your email Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your firend could learn 100
- In some countries criminal trials are shown to the public on television Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Adam Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, really, so, therefore, i think, speaking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01775147929 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90534352059 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8244908511 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2307692308 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193395528474 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602796146819 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549061010547 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081531779797 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628464465782 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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