The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:-Where did you hear this news and your opinion?-The reason why you protest it-Make suggestions f

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the news that was published about constructing some vertical buildings in a park which is exact located in front of our house .

As a matter of fact, that park is the only place where not only my children but also others are entertained by that. Naturally, it is so entertaining and is the only park near our house. To tell the truth, I got really shocked when I understood that a building is going to be built at the heart of the park. Actually, if they do it, no recreational place will be left for playing our children.

I am going to ask you as a representative of others for transferring my request related to preserving the green belt . I would be thankful if you could pay your immediate attention to that.

Yours sincerely,

F.BAGHERI.

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Average: 7.9 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, as a matter of fact, to tell the truth

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62328767123 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9295586242 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684931506849 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6369847273 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 4.34317383033 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145114400293 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590510595049 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289054720425 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875903310909 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278690900616 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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