A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter,
• describe what this book was about
• explain how this book influenced you
• say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my views about the book The Theory of Everything written by Stephen hawking that left a huge impact on me.
Firstly, I have an interest in space science, so I have started reading this book which has covered all the possibilities related to creation and existence of the universe. Though this is not a proven theory, still it is quite famous among many people.
I did not have interest in reading books, but after reading this, my curiosity to know our universe has inculcated. I am quite influenced by it because it has all the answers related to mysteries of the black holes, galaxies, planets, and stars.
I believe that this edition influenced not only me but also the numerous individuals who have interest in knowing the world they are living in. In fact, people have started believing in this theory, even though it has been not proven yet. Nowadays many scientists are experimenting on it, in order to get the fruitful results from this theory.
I am positively waiting for my contribution to be published in your article.
Thanks and Regards
Steve
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oles, galaxies, planets, and stars. I believe that this edition influenced no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, still, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86458333333 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62877952115 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7901949002 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178210560324 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605125456491 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530538479695 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994543932061 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569404570132 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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