A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter,
• describe what this book was about
• explain how this book influenced you
• say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my views about the book The Theory of Everything written by Stephen hawking that left a huge impact on me.
Firstly, due to my interest in space science, I had started reading this book which had covered all the possibilities related to creation and existence of the universe. Though this was not a proven theory, but everything about it was beyond the imagination.
I did not have much interest in quantum physics, however after reading this, my curiosity to know our universe inculcated. Now I am quite influenced by it because it has covered each and everything about the space.
I believe that this edition influenced not only me but also the numerous individuals who have interest in knowing the world they are living in. In fact, people have started believing in this theory, even though it has not proven yet.
I am positively waiting for my contribution to be published a nurse article.
Thanks and Regards
Steve
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92814371257 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67659982008 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9605929179 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193242776234 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725039910947 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577498348418 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105537151834 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577149860388 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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