It is good for children to start using computers from an early age and spent long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
With the upgradation of technology, demand of computers has been increased over the past few years. It became a crucial part of life of the youngsters as they devote a plenty of time using it. It is a matter of concern for few people while others found it beneficial for growth of a child. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits in the subsequent paragraphs before venturing a logical conclusion.
Learning is a part of student life. In order to compete with others, they need to get themselves updated towards new technology. In fact, computers are important for their academic as well as professional growth. It not only makes them familiar with new automation but also helpful for the growth of a nation. As clearly seen in the countries like America, Japan, and Australia, where students are experimenting various things in the field of data processing because they have ample knowledge of latest trends. Thus, it is necessary to promote computers among children for their development as well as development of the nation.
In the contrasting part, addiction of tech devices may distract younger generation from their main goal. Although education of computers is must, but excess usage of it can damage physical as well as mental health. For instance, people who play a lot of games on computers have weak eyesight and it also impacts their studies.
All in all, this trend has more benefits as compared to its disadvantages, but it always be advisable to use computers in a limit. So that it can bring some fruitful results rather than becoming a burden in one's life. Even parents can take initiative to protect their child from negative impacts of over usage of computer by supervising their activities on it.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ssing because they have ample knowledge of latest trends. Thus, it is necessary to promot...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...s compared to its disadvantages, but it always be advisable to use computers in a limit. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...red to its disadvantages, but it always be advisable to use computers in a limit. ...
^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... advisable to use computers in a limit. So that it can bring some fruitful results rath...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...esults rather than becoming a burden in ones life. Even parents can take initiative ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92491467577 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75069232839 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2208518855 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149292365974 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449626652682 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032803397218 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856978326391 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104637659438 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ssing because they have ample knowledge of latest trends. Thus, it is necessary to promot...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...s compared to its disadvantages, but it always be advisable to use computers in a limit. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...red to its disadvantages, but it always be advisable to use computers in a limit. ...
^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... advisable to use computers in a limit. So that it can bring some fruitful results rath...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...esults rather than becoming a burden in ones life. Even parents can take initiative ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92491467577 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75069232839 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2208518855 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149292365974 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449626652682 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032803397218 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856978326391 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104637659438 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.