Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.
According to a religious point of view women efforts in raising a child is highly appreciated.Some people in the western countries think men are equally good as women. Other think women has a vital role in parenting a child. In my opinion women are flawless when its a matter of raising a child.
Firstly, Child is a part of women it takes nine months a child to a mothers wombs. Child is a part of mothers and if he felt something bad or hurt mother always knew that there is something wrong with her baby. Its called a 6th sense of a women for her child and only a mother can sense something which is beyond by the eyes of science.
Secondly, As a point of view of a as working women, Women takes child responsibility better as compared to men. There are many examples in the world where women are doing job and giving proper time to a family. kids are likely attached with mothers rather than fathers. Due to the politeness and effectiveness of mother.
Finally, In our society men used to work for bread and butter while women use to do household work. This has been done from the thousands of years and Its became a part of our DNA. There are many example where men used to marry someone else so her 2nd mother can give a baby proper care.
The bottom line is, Women are very transparent with child and she could take proper responsibility of a child as compare to men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39688715953 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45045996626 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1613438901 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7142857143 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222467429385 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887843551344 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824535899957 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136560869787 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086792269305 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.