Many sports players advertised in sports products. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Many sporting companies advertise their products with the help of famous sports personalities. Though this strategy helps to increase the sales of sports products, on the other hand, puts sporting companies under a lot of financial burdens. In my opinion marketing of sports products by sports, players help in establishing the brand value in the market and thus helps in revenue generation for the company.
Firstly sporting events like cricket, soccer and tennis are gaining immense popularity so is the use of sports products. Despite the fierce competition among established brands new startups are venturing in the market due to the immense potential of churning out profits and thus the strategy of promoting their products through popular sports people is getting adopted. When a famous sports person gets associated with a product it entices people to buy that product due to their huge fan following. In a recent survey done by Time of India, it was published that a startup bat manufacturing company "The Spartan" made immense profits after getting associated with Indian cricketer MS Dhoni moreover its gave global visibility to the product thus the same product is being sold in many countries.
On the other side, we can see that famous celebrities are charging enormous amount of money for promoting sports product which puts start-up brands under a lot of financial burdens thus affecting the risk financial exposure for the startup companies in case the product doesn’t do well in the market. In the recent past, many startup companies have become bankrupt due to such high risk-taking strategies according to a recent survey done by The Reuters.
To conclude even though there are some drawbacks associated with sports product promotion but I staunchly can say there are many advantages which aid the promotion and sales of the sports products thus advantages clearly overshadow the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in revenue generation for the company. Firstly sporting events like cricket, so...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pular sports people is getting adopted. When a famous sports person gets associated ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
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.... On the other side, we can see that famous celebrities are charging enormous amount of money f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 937.175257732 174% => OK
No of words: 307.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30944625407 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73333187551 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2213581121 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 76.5299724578 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.7 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239377245709 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121186426713 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853480749362 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164837947849 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739465463515 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 8.37731958763 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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