The maps illustrate the layout of Colwich Arts Centre between 2005 and at present.
Overall, Colwich Arts Centre has undergone several alterations including the merger between two gallery rooms, the division of the meeting room, the renovation of wasteland and the establishment of new function areas. These developments have transformed the art centre into a more space-effective to serve more visitors.
On the left-hand side of the centre, the meeting room has been divided into two rooms that now are found at the former site of the snack bar. In 2005 the cinema and concert hall were conducted in the same room, there are now two separate areas. Furthermore, the cinema has been narrowed leaving more space for a new central exhibition area in the middle. Whereas the toilet has been relocated to the right-hand side, the new drama studio has been introduced at the back of the centre which adjoining new meeting room 1.
It can be seen from the maps that two gallery rooms on the right-hand side have been merged into one big room and moved to the opposite side, while the café shop has been added next to the new gallery room. The wasteland, which dominated outside the art centre in 2005, has been renovated with a new stage and area for outdoor exhibition and performance.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: dau
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85454545455 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56083018564 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0229022653 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147283483097 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832258286342 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868603258108 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139474890539 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934827283487 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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