Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself.
Dear Mr HI,
I come to Hamilton College from Singapore where I was a student for 10 years. I have studied Computer, Physic, Mathematic and some background about History, Geographic, and Society in English. My best grade is about Computer, it was Grade A.
When I was in Singapore, I had a part-time job in a restaurant which owned by my uncle. I worked 1 hour a day as a waitress, this helps me to gain general knowledge about business.
In free time, I often went to piano club, where I had taken part since I was 6 years old. It was always wonderful place for me to refresh my mind. I, sometimes, went to cinema at the weekend to enjoy the latest movie of Marvel as I am a big fan of it.
I do not often go abroad; I have come to Thailand once. And this is the first time I come to Europe. I find that England is a beautiful country with the best education system. I hope I will earn the qualification and gain more knowledge about business field when I am in Hamilton College.
This is the brief description of my background.
Best wishes,
Marina
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- Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself. 11
- Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself. 11
- You have recently bought a Telephone with answer machine from an online shop. The web page said that the answer machine shows you a list of who left a message so you can choose which to play first. But after taking it home you find out that only the most 73
- Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63658870513 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6198686249 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2857142857 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0513384012657 0.216113520407 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0182256209738 0.0766984524023 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203677434489 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0221907991242 0.12726935374 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177284688155 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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