more and more people are suffring from helth problams caused by a modren life style which can not be treated with modren medicen some people think that return to traditional medicen should be encorage . do you agree or dis agree

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
All the money in the world cant buy you back helth. people are sufferin...
^^^^
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...y in the world cant buy you back helth. people are sufferinh from helth problem caused...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...by a modren lifr style and they are not satisfy with modren medicien , and return to ol...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hey are not satisfy with modren medicien , and return to older days of treditional...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...best way to help out from new disease. while in the time of modern treatment and usi...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dern treatment and using modern medicien , sudden change will occurs in human bod...
^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd using modern medicien , sudden change will occurs in human body, theough that ...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'occur'
Suggestion: occur
...g modern medicien , sudden change will occurs in human body, theough that makes you v...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n body, theough that makes you very weak . where as in the case of traditional med...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
...ody, theough that makes you very weak . where as in the case of traditional medicien ...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ody, theough that makes you very weak . where as in the case of traditional medicien the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ere will be no sideeffects like weakness,etc. In some unique disease like cancer, f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of medicen available in traditional way . the neutralize abstract from the nature...
^^
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... medicen available in traditional way . the neutralize abstract from the nature whi...
^^^
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... medicen available in traditional way . the neutralize abstract from the nature which acts on ...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from the nature which acts on your body , and ot reacts comfortable . you will no...
^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...on your body , and ot reacts comfortable . you will not find any othe helth issues...
^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...your body , and ot reacts comfortable . you will not find any othe helth issues whi...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97857142857 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64785165912 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707142857143 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5289733412 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213790260562 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813913162138 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634132736539 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126470530394 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569978357941 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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