Most countries allow 18 years old people to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other people think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Every youngster will be enthusiastic to drive a car from the day they become an adult of 18 years old.Most of the countries encourage an 18 year old ones to start driving a car. But few individuals think that is not the correct age to drive and it must be atleast 25. In my perception i disagree with the age limit to start at 25, In what view is explained to you in the following passage.
In these days starting to drive a car did not need any age limit.It depends on one smartness and flexibility to drive. As we know every individual preffer to ride a car as means of transport to save their time in these busy days.So immidiately after getting maturity of age 18 they think to drive individually.
Increasing 25years as the boundaries of age to start driving is not necessary.In order to avoid accidents and misdrives one should be with well known driving instructions and must follow each and every rule.It does not depend on how young or old you are.Instead countries can take particular safety measures on road constructions.
After having considered all the points that I have discussed above,we can come to a conclusion that before giving a driving liscense to a person all the regarding tests must be done correctly and should check whether they are following all rules and regulations carefully or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73275862069 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78729707248 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.4220101375 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.857142857 76.5299724578 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.1428571429 16.8248392259 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345762319838 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167762971461 0.0766984524023 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565555505102 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200874090093 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111846057922 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 8.37731958763 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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