Mrs Barret an English speaking woman who lives in your town has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer Write a letter to Mrs Barret In your letter 1 suggest how could you help her in her home 2 say why you would l

Dear Mrs Barrett,
My name is Elena, we already met at the Exhibition one year ago but I am pretty sure you do not remember me. Recently, I came across advertising in a newspaper called Local News where you pointed out that next summer you will require an assistant to help you with your household chores next summer. I would eager to assist you because it would be a great pleasure to communicate with you.
If you allow, I could maintain your scenic garden with your unrivaled fragrant blooms. Also, I might help with your dog, while you are away.
I am dead keen on assisting you not only because I adore flowers and dogs but also, I want to learn your language. I would relish doing speaking practice with you.
As for days, I would be available 4 days a week from 3 p.m. to 7 p.m. However, I will be absent for a couple of weeks in June. I am about to go hiking with my family.
If you are interested in my offer, let me know. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Elena

Votes
Average: 8.2 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32804232804 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42540513586 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1265288582 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250637126982 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100147508437 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544795107501 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137586853999 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406545468403 0.0580467560999 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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