A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntaryl unpaid work at the museum.
Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntrylunpaid work.
In your letter
- explain why you want to do voluntrylunpaid work at the museum
- describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful
- give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I am interested to work as a part-time Volunteer in you museum.
At the onset, I would like to participate in this humanitarian activity because it gives me a sense of appreciation to work for a native cause. Moreover, due to covid-19 pandemic, this museum has suffered from huge financial crises. Therefore, my unpaid services would certainly help the organisation to maintain the expenditure.
As I am working as a software analyst for an IT company, my technical experience would be beneficial for the development of online website for the museum. I believe that the advanced knowledge of programming is sufficient for designing online interface of the museum to entice more tourists.
Currently, I am working from home and I have more spare time. If you allow me, I shall start my duties at the earliest. The more suitable time for me to work in the museum would be between 12:00pm and 3:00 pm. Please feel free to contact me on +14848848448944.
I am hoping to hear a positive response from your end.
Yours sincerely,
John Milton
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
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Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90957446809 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98147194621 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2095509907 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366107302889 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115197262692 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793124276375 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186109866885 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828757913966 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.