Dear Mr. Paul,
I hope this meets you well. I came across an advert for part time voluntary work at the museum, after reading the requirements, I was please to see that they closely match my competence and I would like to volunteer with the Museum..
I live just down the road on No 82, Brampton Street. I currently work with a Non Governmental Organization called The Road to Recover (TRR). Just like yours, the Organization is dedicated to recovering cultures that have faded with time, it also keeps detailed information of activities that have happened in the past.
I have vast knowledge in the history of the country we live and it will be no rocket science explaining to visitors at the museum about ancient history. I particular take joy in doing that.
I would like to volunteer during my annual leave for a period of one month. I would work between 8AM and 5PM all through the week. You can reach me on 0803453424 if you need further information.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Sincerely,
Mrs Linda Steel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...s you well. I came across an advert for part time voluntary work at the museum, after rea...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... would like to volunteer with the Museum.. I live just down the road on No 82,...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...like to volunteer with the Museum.. I live just down the road on No 82, Bramp...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...own the road on No 82, Brampton Street. I currently work with a Non Governmental ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I particular take joy in doing that. I would like to volunteer during my annua...
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Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...annual leave for a period of one month. I would work between 8AM and 5PM all thro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6978021978 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6593690399 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8251074842 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.25 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294639051849 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780083610485 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743785314015 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137688567478 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920564436509 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.