Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with your requirement for a person willing to work part-time without pay at your museum. I am interested in working at this position and would like to apply for the voluntary work.
I have been looking for some voluntary work since past 2 weeks as I have some time-off from my university lectures. Being able to help people without any monetary benefits has always been my interest since childhood. Therefore, I would be more than happy to extent some support towards the museum.
Prior to this, I have worked at a library wherein I had managed several tasks single-handedly. During my work tenure, I have attended many visitor queries, on call and in-person, and also provided administration support in various day-to-day activities.
I look forward to begin working with the museum to the earliest and would be available to work anytime between 1pm to 6pm Monday-Friday. I hope you consider my request and give me an opportunity to work at the museum.
I will look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Kriti Khanna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to beginning'.
Suggestion: to beginning
...ay-to-day activities. I look forward to begin working with the museum to the earliest...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n opportunity to work at the museum. I will look forward to hear from you. ...
^
Line 10, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...k at the museum. I will look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Kriti K...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01657458564 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89224276667 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3723723474 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380912667515 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139115204359 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946416564207 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198235155603 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125178622252 0.0580467560999 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.