Dear Mr. Stevens,
I am writing in connection with my interest to work at our company head office in Milan for the last six months of this financial year. I seek your assistance in this regard so that I can make the most of this visit.
As you are aware, my team is working on our new clothing line which is expected to be released at the beginning of the next financial year. We have been working very hard on this, however, I believe, we are not completely confident about the final output. Therefore, I would want to work at our company headquarters to be able to understand more about the recent fashion trends in accordance with our company standards. By the end of these six months, I will be in a better position to create big profits for the company with a successful new launch.
While I will be in Milan, my co-worker Princy will be taking care of my work as well as supervising the team to make sure everything is smooth. I will be constantly following up with her to make sure that no work is affected in my absence.
I would be grateful if you could recommend our Chairman to allow me to work at our Milan office. I assure you that I will make the best use of this opportunity.
I will look forward hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Victoria Hardman
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o allow me to work at our Milan office. I assure you that I will make the best us...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ke the best use of this opportunity. I will look forward hearing from you. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45762711864 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5634997892 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2084772949 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24334873359 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898042111851 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603528574883 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127325126179 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765016415404 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o allow me to work at our Milan office. I assure you that I will make the best us...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ke the best use of this opportunity. I will look forward hearing from you. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45762711864 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5634997892 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2084772949 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24334873359 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898042111851 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603528574883 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127325126179 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765016415404 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.