Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the opening of a new program on your news channel. I was overwhelmed to hear about this program which will show the beautiful views of the Himalayas.
The reason for writing about this place is that I have completed my graduation in computer science engineering from Shimla which is the capital of Himachal in the Himalayas of India. This state has a pleasant atmosphere in summers and extremely cold weather conditions in winters.
If you want my suggestions to cover your story on media, I would advise you in exploring the valleys in the mountains of the Himalayas. Also, some of them are still unknown to the world and have been not covered by the media channels. If you would like my suggestion, I can send you a list of those valleys which are still hidden in the Himalayas.
Many researchers, especially in the pharmaceutical industry have discovered many useful plants for medicinal use to sustain humankind. As a result, it would be a great chance for your news channel to explore the hidden mysteries in the Himalayas.
I wish you all the best for your first show.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir I am writing this letter in regards to the opening of a new program on your ne...
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Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...overed many useful plants for medicinal use to sustain humankind As a result it wou...
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Line 14, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...how Yours faithfully Shwatank Bhasin
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75742574257 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64308687793 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579207920792 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 202.0 16.3608247423 1235% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 961.0 76.5299724578 1256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 202.0 16.8248392259 1201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.0 4.34317383033 898% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273172874352 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273172874352 0.0766984524023 356% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13209638023 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064579682164 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 102.0 8.37731958763 1218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -116.63 70.7449484536 -165% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 79.7 7.45979381443 1068% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.02 7.59969072165 224% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 82.8 8.54432989691 969% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 8.15463917526 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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