One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business.
Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter
• give your opinion of your friend's business idea
• tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer
• And explain your reasons for this decision.
Dear Hung,
It’s your friend, Truong. I’ve been considering your offer to cooperate with you on your new online clothes shopping website and I think this decision of yours is quite bold. However, I don’t think that opening an online shop right now is a good idea, especially when there are a large number of websites out there with good reputation to compete with. Therefore, I’m writing this letter to let you know that I will have to disappoint you at the moment.
Although selling outfits on the internet is kind of a trend these days, I doubt that your shop will make a lot of profits because like I said, it is impossible to take on the other big websites. Moreover, we don’t have much money to invest seriously and I myself don’t like to ask for a loan from the banks or anyone else.
So, I’ll just have to let you down this time. However, I do hope that you will find a way to fulfill your dream. For now, bye!
Your friend,
Truong Nguyen
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| 2018-05-14 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... a good idea, especially when there are a large number of websites out there with good reputation...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...ough selling outfits on the internet is kind of a trend these days, I doubt that your sho...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, therefore, i think, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63276836158 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40782715064 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649717514124 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8291787338 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372360748278 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165751133527 0.0766984524023 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103214065534 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212938889681 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102016586723 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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