Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Opinions differ as to whether one should dedicate his time for family and friends or his career should be prioritized. I believe a successful career should always take precedence over one’s personal relationships.
Although today’s fast-paced live is vastly consuming people’s time, it is important, to some extent, that individuals share a small portion of time for their family. This is because family is still one’s greatest asset which hee needs to spend some time to strengthen his connection to other members. Otherwise, his family will gradually become broken at some point. Along with family members, relationships with close friends should also be maintained because people may need help or consult these acquaintances in the future. Thus, it is wise to spend a small amount of time for close relatives and friends.
Having said that, individuals’ career should come as a first priority. In this material world, money is the main reason for a person to work and is also the key to raising the family’s happiness in this case. With this in mind, one should concentrate on developing his career to increase incomes in order to provide for his home. Even when people claim that they have a rock solid relationship, money issues can still be able to come between couples. In fact, surveys say that many marriages end up separated due to insufficient supply to basic needs. If people want to maintain a happy family, the first thing they have to do is to secure a successful career which generates as much money as possible. Furthermore, since the opportunity to success comes rarely, people then have to spend even more time to make sure they do not miss out any precious chance.
In conclusion, the given reasons prove that people should definitely focus on their career if they want to keep their family together because, after all, money comes first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether one should dedicate his time for family...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, then, thus, after all, as to, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80073925387 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.038148533 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.733333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204266436661 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697636184284 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05092752266 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115762669426 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569363346796 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.