Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear John and Mary,
I'm just writing to let you know that I've received the photos of my holiday last month.
I'm very glad that you sent me these beautiful pictures. They cover all breathtaking views of your city and all the amazing moments that we had while I was there. What's more, I want to give my thanks to both of you and your family for welcoming me this whole time. Seriously, you don't know how thankful I am for your hospitality.
The reason I couldn't write you sooner is that this has been a hectic week for me. I had to work restlessly last week to deliver my work before the deadline. Luckily, I finished yesterday in time and I'm sorry for this late response, my friends.
my boss has given me another break for the rest of the month as a reward so if you could, I would like to invite you to come to my house. if you're not free this time, then I hope you'll give me a call anytime the future so I can return the favor.
I hope to see you again soon
All the best,
Truong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16494845361 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13924357114 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9376080954 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32397282288 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122288178154 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640625973053 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152215351225 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906374593397 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.