Dear Selin,
How was your birthday party? I hope it was fine. I!m really sorry for missing it but I had a minor incident consequently I was shocked. I would like to organise an event for you to accept my apologies.
I was driving your house when a white car hit mine. As you know it wasn't insured hense I got frightened when driver called policeman. Despite it was all her fault, I was blamed of it.
I couldn't phone you since we were on a busy road and other driver was shouting continiously. I was desperate and didn't know what to do. I had waited there for three hours before my car was taken to repairment service.
I again would like to apologise for it and if it is okey for you, I would like to organise a dinner at my house this Friday and prepare some home cooked food which are your favourites to celebrate your new age so that my apaologies may be accepted. I hope you will be available for it.
Please let me know if you can attand it.
Best wishes
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or incident consequently I was shocked. I would like to organise an event for you...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...vent for you to accept my apologies. I was driving your house when a white car...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g your house when a white car hit mine. As you know it wasnt insured hense I got f...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...en a white car hit mine. As you know it wasnt insured hense I got frightened when dri...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...all her fault, I was blamed of it. I couldnt phone you since we were on a busy road ...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...uting continiously. I was desperate and didnt know what to do. I had waited there for...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as desperate and didnt know what to do. I had waited there for three hours before...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...car was taken to repairment service. I again would like to apologise for it an...
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Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... so that my apaologies may be accepted. I hope you will be available for it. P...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28342245989 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37821862289 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631016042781 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0374640493 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2142857143 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193088797512 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654653579046 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049645491425 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115449361349 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03475856895 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.