Dear Selin,
How was your birthday party? I hope it was fine. I'm really sorry for missing it but I had a minor incident consequently I was could not tell you. I would like to organise an event for you to accept my apologies.
First of all, I was driving your house when a car hit mine. As you know it wasn't insured hense I got frightened when driver called policeman. Despite it was all her fault, I was blamed for it.
Secondly, I couldn't have time to call you. I was really upset and I didn't know what to do given the fact that we were on a busy road and she was shouting continuously. I had waited there for three hours before my car was taken to repairment service.
Finally, I again would like to apologise for it and if it is okey for you, I would like to organise a dinner at my house this Friday and to prepare some home cooked food which are your favourite meals to celebrate your new age so that my apologies may be accepted. I hope you will be available for it.
Please let me know if it is convenient for you.
Best wishes
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...our birthday party? I hope it was fine. Im really sorry for missing it but I had a...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...driving your house when a car hit mine. As you know it wasnt insured hense I got f...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...use when a car hit mine. As you know it wasnt insured hense I got frightened when dri...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...lt, I was blamed for it. Secondly, I couldnt have time to call you. I was really ups...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e to call you. I was really upset and I didnt know what to do given the fact that we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1862745098 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.325307502 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0509987342 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203631866353 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766757780841 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582792218749 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127022694432 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520052525097 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.