One of your friends wants to move to the city you live in. Write a letter to him/her and say,
-Give some information about the city.
-Recommend a place to stay.
-Why is it a good idea to move there?
Dear Janki,
Hope you are doing great. I am glad to know that you are moving to gandhinagar. I would love to suggest you a place to live, this is the reason of writing this letter.
As you know I born and brought up in gandhinagar, so I am giving you some background information about this city. Gandhinagar is the only well-constructed and perfectly developed city of Gujarat. Moreover, it is famous not only for its greenery but also for pollution-free atmosphere.
Furthermore, the area I would like to recommend is in the Pratiksha Avenue, which is in the outskirts of the city, but no worries it is fully developed and safe. Buying groceries would be effortless because there is a shopping mall near the residence.
Gandhinagar is becoming IT hub and you belongs to this field, so you will find good job here. Likewise, we, in gandhinagar, have many multi national companies as well as government jobs are in trend, nowadays. Therefore, you can choose whatever you want.
Hope this will help you.
See you soon,
Rucha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
... Gandhinagar is becoming IT hub and you belongs to this field, so you will find good jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8595505618 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92642708916 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7509114228 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5384615385 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203581086951 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692444375576 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596593628916 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101581837165 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597503317008 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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