An organization has given an advertisement for a part time volunteer job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organization. In your letter:
Introduce yourself.
Why you think you are suitable for this job.
State when you will be able to join that job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in reference to your advert in newspaper "The Canadian Times" to express my consent about the position of a volunteer teacher for local children.
I am Post Graduated in English Literature and currently working as a Professor in the University of Toronto. As a part of my summer internship, I have taught to children of villages for 6 months. So I have hands on experience in teaching those who are illiterate or rewarded with very nominal education. Hence, I believe I can be suitable for this position. Moreover, I have spare time in the evening as I return from the university at 5. I was thinking about utilizing this free time for welfare of society, then I saw the ad in newspaper and made up my mind to devote my time for poor local children.
I can join this duty from the coming Monday on 11 Nov. Till that time, I have some works in pipeline and after completing them, I can start working.
Should you have any query, please feel free to call me on: 9501133847.
Eagerly waiting for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Patrick Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73195876289 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74352734437 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654639175258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.979625017 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236450301035 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772875533472 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663980232226 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113337895611 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582973825197 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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