ou have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britai

Dear Mr. Sullivan,
I am writing to you to apply for a job position of Spanish instructor advertised in the Teaching Professional April edition, as my experience and skill set match perfectly with the job description.
I have a Bachelor degree in Spanish and I have been working as a Spanish language teacher at Birmingham University for five years. In my work, I always try to find an individual approach to every student. Therefore, it allows me to boost their language level in short time. Additionally, I have had experience in teaching 3-7 years old children during my work in an elementary school in Portland. I have all the necessary abilities to make language classes interesting for students and try to involve every single one of them in studying.
I am sending my CV and reference letters from my former employees along with this letter for your review. If you find my person matching the job's requirements, or if you have any questions please feel free to contact me by email: a.m@ma.com.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours faithfully,
M.B.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90659340659 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91111843701 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9372676594 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2222222222 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20744890212 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766895088405 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864586051436 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104293374094 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828912233283 0.0580467560999 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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